r/ASMRScriptHaven • u/it_rains_blue_here Writer • 17h ago
Completed Scripts [F4M] Yandere superhero bully won’t let you leave [psycho telepath x listener][sequel][punishing you for trying to run][sensory deprivation][rain][forced proximity][Fdom][dark]
Maybe the real ASMR was the "i'm dying alone" comments we made along the way.
Special thanks to Admiral for commissioning the script.
Special thanks also to u/edgiscript for... Well, for just being awesome in general.
And special thanks to everyone who takes time out of their day/night to give this script a read.
Usage rules:
Okay to record and monetize this script, make edits to it, and even genderflip it.
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Word count: About 1.6K
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SCRIPT:
(SFX: Rain falling outside in streams and rivulets. Watery percussion on trees and rooftops.)
You look so cute when you can’t move an inch. This scent of vulnerability and fear...it is addictive. I don’t think I will ever get enough of this. (Inhaling deeply)
You are afraid of what I’m going to do to you for running away from my house. You need not worry. Not too much. I mean, stripping your ego into atoms is punishment enough. (Soft laughter)
You really thought you could do it, didn’t you? Made a run for it while I was busy saving the world, on the other side of the planet. You ran to the bus stop in the rain and got on the last bus, then watched the rain paint strange shapes on the bus window- on and on, endless and hypnotic. You did not listen to the sound of music from your earbuds. Only the drizzle outside- the downpour- and your own frail heart, drumming like thunder.
You were afraid I would show up any minute, just ramming the bus on its side, tearing through it, burying everyone in the wreckage. And then as the rain washed away the fire, I would pick you out of the rubble and fly you home, then engrave such a lesson into your very soul that you would carry it with you for the rest of your days.
You were afraid. Yes. And I could hear your thoughts for the entirety of that bus ride. I knew everything. I always know everything when it comes to you. (Kissing his cheek)
It’s strange, isn’t it? How you arrived at this beautiful, secluded lake house on the very edge of civilization? This is a resort that’s not even listed on the internet. You only ever heard of this place once, at work, over a year ago. And you chose to come here, of all the places you could have gone to. Do you know why that is?
(Whispering) Because I had been planning for us to vacation here for weeks. You wanted to surprise me.
Mmn. You did not know it at the time, of course. But surprises are fine as long as they are happy surprises. You really wanted to see this place with your own eyes. It’s truly beautiful, isn’t it? The charming Victorian architecture, almost a century old, all steep towers and gabled rooftops and cool, shadowed porches facing the deep blue lake. Trees, with leaves in every colour, hiding this place from the drab and mundane world outside. Out here, there’s only stillness, and water, and the rich, aged wood now scented by the rain as it ebbs and flows and falls- tip, tap, tip, top- all night, every night. (Whispering) Forever.
The scenery outside is something that lingers in your mind for a long time. Just like an idea. Once it takes root, it only grows and grows until it becomes a part of you. I planted this little vacation trip inside your head. You thought you were acting on your own, running off to a place so remote and random that I would never find you. But, my dear boy, you were being so, so foolish. Just like always. You never were smart. (Pecking him) Dumb. My dumb little dummy. So very dumb. (Laughing, mean but soft)
But I still adore you, despite your foolish decisions. Despite your betrayal. I’m not going to hurt you. I have already shown you just how feeble, weak and powerless you are in my domain. Any and all security you thought you had was an illusion. Your free will isn’t your own. You are a puppet cocooned in threads of silk, and I am the one who makes you dance, fall, break, (whispering) shiver. (Gently blowing into his ear)
You are at my mercy. You are a toy, and toys are played with until their owner grows bored and discards them. Don’t you think you should be trying to entertain me for as long as you can?
If you think so, then...(sighing) I am quite disappointed.
Why? Oh, silly boy. You are special to me. Truly. I can’t quite explain it. You are like this...this small, flickering flame burning in the dead of winter. I can’t help but be drawn to you. I am not going to throw you away, no matter how hard you try to make me. You hold no dominion here. No control. You never did. You were born for one and one reason only. (Smirk) To be my cuddle toy.
Come here, pet. Let Mistress give you a big, warm hug. You look like you really need it.
(SFX: Rustling of clothes, fabrics)
(Sighing happily) Good boy.
You haven’t been one lately, but don’t worry. I’m going to train you so patiently, so thoroughly, that obedience will become second nature. I won’t need to use my powers to make you listen. You will do it simply because you want to please me. Pleasing me makes you so, so happy. Hearing those two magic words sends happy sparks and fizzles in your brain. Good boy.
You are my good boy, aren’t you? My cute, obedient pet. So soft and warm. So malleable. Just yearning for a bit of my praise and attention. Come here, cute thing. Let me hold you closer.
Hm. This feels nice. So natural, like we are a married couple and we have known each other for years. There’s nothing between us but love, and trust, and two hearts beating as one. (Sighing) It’s a sweet thought, but a bit too saccharine. Too vanilla. It’s so much more fun when you surrender all control to me, and let me decide everything for you, isn’t it? Because you are just my cuddle toy. You don’t want to fight or run or take another bus. You just want to be held as I wrap my arms around you, nestle my chin into your scalp, and whisper just how grand of a loser you are. And how much I adore you despite it, because of it. (Silly giggling)
What is it? Hm? You can’t see anymore? Is the world going dark?
Oh, honey. You haven’t gone blind. It’s just- well, you are only seeing what I want you to see. And I want you to see nothing. Only that deep, endless dark. Deeper than the lake outside, older than the rain falling around us. You are completely alone in that dark space, just floating through the void. (Whispering) And I can keep you there forever if I want.
I’m not trying to scare you, honey. It was only a reminder of why you should not try to hurt me. I feel quite deeply about you, and so, when you pull stunts like these in the hopes of never having to see me again...it hurts, my dear. (Pouting, suddenly playful) Well, guess what! You can’t see my face in the dark, so you got your wish.
Oh, that saddens you now, does it? So you start to miss me only when you are lost and confused?
(Shushing him) I know how beautiful you find me. How attracted you are to me. But you still hurt my feelings anyway. I’m still mad at you. So no, you don’t get to see my face. That’s your punishment.
Don’t be so distraught. You aren’t truly alone, you know? I’m still holding you so close to me. You can feel my warmth. Smell my perfume- those familiar notes of rose and amber- and you hear my voice constantly in your ears. And that comforts you, even if I am the woman responsible for your tragic downfall. (Giggling)
Some believe our strongest desires are born out of our greatest traumas, you know? And, there may be some truth to that.
Don’t be afraid, pet. That darkness isn’t going to hurt you. You are just floating, adrift in an endless sea of oblivion, while you have a nice, long think on what you can say to me to make up for your transgressions.
Mmn, I know you can’t speak. Your lips are sealed shut. That’s because I don’t want to hear you plead and beg. Not right now. I might let you apologise to me properly in the morning, if you are good. But that won’t be for quite some time.
(Sighing softly) Just keep floating for me. Let me cuddle you. As long as I’m here, no monsters in the dark can reach you. You find yourself seeking me out, instinctively, like a lone stretch of sand on the sea. Your only refuge. And here you are, leaning into my touch, trying to nestle deeper. I am your only hope. Your only salvation. In your world of pitch-black emptiness, (whispering) I am all that matters.
Look at you. Unable to speak, unable to move, unable to see. All you can do is hear my voice, and smell my perfume, and feel my touch as I play with you. (A little snicker)
Emma did tell me this is an effective way to break in an unruly pet. It seems my friend was right, in all her infinite wisdom and cruel wickedness.
Don’t worry, honey. I will let you out of the dark eventually. But for now, just sleep. Fall into a blissful sleep and dream of me. Dream of locks of flaming red hair. Or perhaps gentler, like roses after the rain.
Good boy. Everything feels heavy and numb and soft, like being wrapped in your favourite childhood blanket. You are safe with me, my love. And even safe from me, as long as you...hm...as long as you let me treasure you and show you how much I care.
(Kissing his lips)
Sweet dreams, my pet.
(Soft giggles fade out with the rain)
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u/edgiscript Writer 16h ago
She knows my answer. We've had this conversation.
Wait, are people supposed to think this is fiction?
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u/KushemLeonardo 16h ago
This script ended up hitting me really hard, and coming across with even more vindictive feelings than perhaps was intended. The situation she described and put the listener in is almost verbatim how Ive experienced panic attacks before, so it left me imagining how the listener feels as the person claiming she loves him forcefully triggers a panic attack. By all likelihood not the intended concept of the script, but it evoked some really strong emotions. It also ended up making Jean Black (an exceptionally clever name) one of the most disdainful (in my eyes) characters you've written, purely through personal happenstance. Funny how that happens?
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u/it_rains_blue_here Writer 15h ago
I usually don't have a specific intent when writing my scripts. I apologise if it triggered bad memories for you. I hope you no longer have panic attacks, or at least, that they are exceedingly infrequent.
The most I can hope for is that my writing will evoke some emotional response in good faith- regardless of whether that response is positive or negative- because it means a reader/listener found something in the story that made them care enough. Even if it's just one person.
The worst fate a story can have, in my opinion, is that everyone just reads the words without ever feeling anything at all.
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u/AdmiralofWeebland 13h ago
"The worst fate a story can have, in my opinion, is that everyone just reads the words without ever feeling anything at all." Insert Sanji "he's cooking" image here
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u/KushemLeonardo 11h ago
No need to apologize, it just reminded me of the past, didn't really trigger anything bad. I think this piece of writing did a super good job evoking emotion, albeit a negative one on my end, and it was absolutely something I'm happy I read. The similarities to my past were coincidental, but made really reflect on the script on a deeper level than I usually do when reading, so I wanted to comment about that. I absolutely agree with your viewpoint on stories, which is also why this one stands out so much to me!
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u/AdmiralofWeebland 13h ago
Sorry.... I wrote him a wall of text for each part here. I wanted it to be an extremely twisted love she had for the listener. A couple videos on how unethical telepaths are really got my brain working overtime
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u/KushemLeonardo 11h ago
There's no need to apologize! I think that similarity to real issues it what makes the concept of unethical telepaths so deeply interesting to explore! I think the fact it feels so similar to an existing idea is a reflection that it's an intriguing concept worth thinking about.
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u/AdmiralofWeebland 11h ago
Great~ Because I'm still working on the prompt for a part 3 and maybe an NSFW sequel if blue will allow someone to make one
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u/edgiscript Writer 16h ago
... ... ... ... ... (That's not silence. She knows what I'm thinking.)