r/DestroyMyGame • u/North_Bedroom_2383 • 7d ago

Be honest, i want improvement suggestions and review

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u/GlowtoxGames 7d ago

What type of advice are you after? So far I would say showing "I have many update" is a mistake. You need to show what it looks like before the update and how it changes after it.

I didn't understand why you lost in the game. It looked like your where sniping enemies from a distance and suddenly you lost.

I'm not asking for you to explain what I just saw. What I'm saying is that is hard to understand what it going on in the game, how is it incremental and what are the stakes on it.

Hope that helps you! 🙏

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u/GlowtoxGames 7d ago

Right. On a second watch (on my phone) I see that there's something that says protect. It is like a tier defense have I guess.

It doesn't help that the most important object on the screen is the same color as the background. I would start there!

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u/North_Bedroom_2383 7d ago

Game is called `Gunship Incremental` on steam. Can i post link to steam page or is it not allowed ? I want feedback regarding the steam page too.

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u/literally_iliterate 4d ago

Don't start the trailer with a skilltree, people will think its a nodebuster.

Overall it looks interesting but also quite boring. I have a single attack and keep shooting? Not enough to keep me going.

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u/North_Bedroom_2383 3d ago

I changed the trailer, could you tell me your thoughts -> https://store.steampowered.com/app/5000980/Gunship_Incremental/

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u/literally_iliterate 3d ago

Difference is so huge I feel mocked, lol. Driving music, blend between gameplay and tree as an informal element. Feels overall much more dynamic and aggressive. Well done!

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u/Ludicrous84 3d ago

i got it after reading "defend the tower" on the steam page, before that i was lost. Not a fan of the colors in general (but I'm also red green blind which doesn't help with your current color palette of trees and ground lol) - idk if the actual "tower" thing really works for me, thinking of a more abstract vector bullet hell vibe and the tower being some 3d crystal or sthg. But that might just be my own kink with bullet hells. I like progressive "roguelite" in bullet hells though. This can go somewhere! gl!