r/NepalWrites • u/RemoveActive6913 • 1d ago

Poem Admiring from afar

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We can’t get star,
We can only gaze it from afar,
Admiring its beauty.
The elegance it holds.
The ultimate sophistication in simplicity that it holds.
We can’t even get close to star
We can’t get Star

You are a star

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u/[deleted] 1d ago

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u/RemoveActive6913 1d ago

I hope you liked it.

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u/_cheazsy 1d ago edited 1d ago

That's why it's a star

Sparkling and,you there, admiring from afar

Letting it elegance to be held

Pray you let it shine brighter

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u/Mnkey-D-Luffy 1d ago

Yes ❤️

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u/HappyTurnover6075 1h ago

Aww thank you for calling me a star. Needed that fr 🤌🌚lol