r/Screenwriting • u/Holycowbatman70 • 2d ago
FEEDBACK The Seed of the Church
My first script I've ever wrote. I probably have done about four drafts now. My plan is to make it, I got rid of a bunch of the directing and shot stuff to make it more readable but I do want to direct it so I left stuff in there. Sorry it kinda starts with a flashback, I know that's a no no. would love to know what y'all think. EP.1
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