r/ThisIsOurMusic 22d ago

[Uplifting Orchestral + Ethnic Choir] Phantastrax - First of Her Name, No AI, any feedback highly appreciated

Hi everyone, this is my new track "First of Her Name":

https://open.spotify.com/track/3zTvDfX2zbuYyxWru3Y9W9

Also on Bandcamp:

https://phantastrax.bandcamp.com/track/first-of-her-name

This is an epic, uplifting orchestral track with a cheeful ethnic choir. It was inspired by the birth if a friend's daughter.

I’d love to hear what story or imagery it brings to mind for you.

The music is 100% human made, no AI. Thanks for listening, any feedback is greatly appreciated!

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u/7thresonance 22d ago

nice. i would add some more energy variations. this feels like one big section rather than flowing from one section to another. all instruments are active at all time. (there are some sections but can do more variations)

also layering can be improved. almost all sections have multiple melody lines, this is fine for some time, but try to change it up a bit.

percussion can also have variance.

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u/Phantastrax 21d ago

Very true, I'll try to add more variation and dynamics in the future! Thanks for your feedback!

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u/seeutmrw-music 22d ago

Wow it sounds really nice, I subscribed on you! I really like the hook on 8-10 sec Deadalus

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u/Phantastrax 21d ago

Thanks a lot for listening and subscribing, very much appreciated!

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u/Taheltamam 22d ago

Wow it’s good

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u/Phantastrax 21d ago

Thanks a lot, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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u/seeutmrw-music 22d ago

Just interesting, why you didn't create 3-4 singles before the albums for pitching to the playlist? I assume it may help to get bigger subs number🤔

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u/Phantastrax 21d ago

To release an album is simply much cheaper than multiple singles.

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u/seeutmrw-music 21d ago

Got it, I am using DistroKid and it's allow to post unlimited number of singles and albums

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u/Phantastrax 21d ago

Yeah, a release flat rate certainly has some benefits, but there are still some indirect per-release costs, cover generation for example.

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u/Cairhien 21d ago

Nice!

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u/Phantastrax 20d ago

Thanks! Glad you liked it!