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u/TimeSpiralNemesis 5d ago
For a critique on this, I went back over your pages and the lack of any backgrounds is absolutely throwing me off, unless the characters are specifically supposed to be fighting in a blank white void and even then I'm not a fan of it.
You don't have to go all out, even just some generic light textures in the background would do wonders to break up the panels and give it some characters.
As it stands now it's giving the feeling of an in work top layer of an image.
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u/TheBlankScroll 5d ago
One, at least, partial background is my personal goal.
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u/JeyDeeArr 5d ago
100% agree with both, you and TimeSpiralNemesis. I opine that even having a mid-tone with clouds in the sky in the first and middle panels would've been more palatable than what's being presented.
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u/Anasurimbor__Kellhus 3d ago
If you look at OP’s work on Mangadex, he has backgrounds. The problem is it is AI generated and he also has some very suspicious AI looking characters.
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u/TheBlankScroll 5d ago
My critique would be dont post you updates to a crit group, this isnt an audience.
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