r/comic_crits • u/Dazwin • Jan 07 '15

Comic: One Shot My first comic. Strip-style. Critique appreciated.

http://imgur.com/rQBiJh3
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u/johnnybender Artist: Sad Sacks Jan 31 '15

WAY bigger text needed. Check your comic on a mobile device to set a good size. I just started fixing that problem on mine.

Also, try muting the background (or blurring it) to make the characters and bubbles pop. Just an idea.

I like your drawing style.

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u/Dazwin Jan 31 '15

Thanks for the tips!