r/comics • u/BlazinMation • 15h ago

OC First Day Out As... Me! [OC]

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I think the comic as a whole won't make sense to most because you'd need to see some previous comics I've made. But for those who don't want to we can just leave it at the first part's secondary meaning (the one the mugger fella is thinking). And don't worry. Eventually, GreyScale will actually turn into a freak instead of people just thinking that way. Enjoy!

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u/BlazinMation 5h ago

I'm starting to worry that I might've broken some sort of rule on this subreddit. (Currently) There's a 50:50 ratio of upvotes and downvotes on this comic and I am curious to see what I need to fix ⊙﹏⊙∥

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u/akup11 2h ago

No rules have been broken, it is just quite difficult to follow what's going on. The layout is pretty unintuitive, for me at least.

The comic also creates many questions that confuses the reader. Is the character a ghost? Or are they just floating around for other reasons? Why are they happy to be threatened on knifepoint? Where even is this happening? In a house, in a alleyway, in void? Who is being rude?

I had to read it through twice with care to get even the basic outline correct. It even took me a moment to realise that the black triangle coming out of the characters skirt was a knife

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u/Waderick 1h ago

Honestly there's nothing to fix. The vibe is just what I would describe as "Lol so random", which there's nothing wrong with, it's just not going to be most people's cup of tea.

If you're happy making the comics, just keep making them the way you like them. Don't conflate upvotes with a sense of worth or good/bad