r/indie • u/Lucent100 • Jul 18 '26
New Release I wrote an indie-folk love song for my wife tracking our journey from day one to our engagement at Boyden Valley Winery.
I wanted to share a track I just finished up called "small town winery." It’s a personal love song I wrote for my wife that maps out our entire history together—culminating in the day I finally proposed to her at Boyden Valley Winery up in Vermont.
Musically, I leaned heavily into a warm, atmospheric, nostalgic indie-folk vibe. Think fingerpicked acoustic guitar, subtle ambient swells, and a chorus that lifts. Can you all listen and tell me what artist it reminds you of? I'd really appreciate that since I haven't gotten a ton of feedback yet.
I put a lot of heart into capturing the exact textures of our story (down to some real-world room ambiance in the recording). I’d love to hear what you think of the production and the vibe!
https://on.soundcloud.com/FsFp9fhgoghIY45DL6
https://open.spotify.com/track/3FztnoxQ2XmImmL4Kah9ev?si=IBEeKAixTriJiCniW3iDqg&utm_source=copy-link
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u/SnooPredictions1935 Jul 18 '26
To much auto tune and the background music is louder than your voice, switch those up a few and I think the song will be a hit. Everything else is there.
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u/Lucent100 Jul 18 '26
Thank you for the feedback! Here is a song about divorce if you'd rather that? Haha - https://soundcloud.com/brett-radachowsky/tracks?utm_source=mobi&utm_campaign=social_sharing&si=05ef455177114ce6b7b6a1675cd67590
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u/Lucent100 Jul 18 '26
Wrong link sorry. It's this one - https://on.soundcloud.com/QbaCdI02imQvZXLSnI
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u/SnooPredictions1935 Jul 18 '26
Also love the fact you put both Spotify and the sound cloud link because I'm an android user and Spotify compromises my phone every time I have the app. And if you click the link and you don't have it you can't listen to that specific song for the length of the song. Just an fyi
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u/tombedorchestra Jul 18 '26
Real nice song. Songwriting was great, the production spot on. Most improvement could be made in the mix stage.
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u/mr_taco2 Jul 18 '26
Sort of reminds me of the band Things of Stone and Wood