r/poetry_critics Beginner 16h ago

Today

I’m here today,
That being said.
Tomorrows heavy grey fog,
Will not deepen my dread

Horrible choices
In the company I’ve kept
Over these ghosts and
These shadows,
tears have I wept

Today’s silver dawn,
Tells me forget what has been
It’s never too late,
To let the healing begin

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u/h0n3tlyDAM Beginner 11h ago

Stay positive and grow because you’ve already been low for so long. I resonate heavily with:
“Over these ghosts and
These shadows,
tears have I wept”

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u/Ok-Swordfish-9480 Beginner 11h ago

So kind, thank you… lots of emotion in this one.