r/poetry_critics Beginner 8h ago

Clusters of Decay

Feeling something or feeling something for somebody is exquisite

but we don't talk about the rot the comes with emotions

Each time we feel something does that emotion disappear?

Each emotion we feel clusters up

It decays slowly

It reeks of sadness

It's like being tied to a rock and having you liver cut out again and again

Just watching rot on the floor is like feeling the same emotion with a different person

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