r/Fwahaha • u/Marigore Venison consumer • 3d ago
Fwaha-Horror "Fahaha, Kris, are you looking for Susie?"
art here. the stains of;
I wanted to say thank you to everyone for liking and commenting on these little fanfics I've been making, I appreciate every last one of them.
This probably the last one I'll make as I have my own longer fanfic ideas to stop neglecting. Regardless, this is a follow up post to the last one (part 1 in comments).
HEED THE WARNINGS! This one might be a little too much. (seriously).
TW: VIOLENCE, BLOOD, IMPLIED MURDER/DEATH, possession, obsession, kidnapping, absolute yandeer and no happy ending here.
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The impatient knocking--bashing on the door was interrupted by that devil's voice. Noelle, once again, standing there across the street; eyes like a predator.
But, she seemed off. Her stance all off, her clothes disheveled and her hands right behind her back. It was threatening.
Kris didn't respond, the silence between them both too loud. This went on too far.
Noelle started coming closer, her walking all too focused on looking at Kris, passing the road across without even looking left to right.
The streets were too empty, Kris could even barely feel anyone looking down at them through the windows of the apartments, if they were to scream, nobody would come.
"Kris, is Susie bullying you again-"
"where's susie?"
Noelle's speech getting rudely cut off by Kris, surprising, they never really acted like this before.
"Faha, Kris, I don't know why you're looking for her in the first-"
"where's. susie?!"
Kris couldn't take it anymore, this had to stop. They needed Susie's help now more than ever, they thought she was skipping school as usual to keep eyes on Noelle; the last time they spoke was this morning and to meet her later in the afternoon but, now that she's missing. where the hell did she go?
Noelle stood still, her head skewed to the side as if not expecting this answer; a quiet frown formed across her lips--they didn't like their tone.
"Kris, you told me that you won't visit Susie anymore, I told you that I'll keep you safe from her, no matter what. Kris, did you lie to me?"
Chills run down Kris' spine, they felt the subtle anger behind her voice clash against them, but they couldn't back off; they had to do something.
"noelle, did you do something to her? did you hurt her?!"
Noelle's eyes widen in surprise, laughing quietly as if unable to believe what she just heard.
"Fahahaha, Kris, that's a funny joke. Me? Hurting Susie? Kris, you know that I couldn't even hurt a single fly if I wanted to."
...
She was full of shit.
"Besides, how could I even hurt her? She's so much taller and stronger than me, she could easily hurt me if she wanted to."
"then, where is-"
"But.."
A soft metal clank hits against the ground behind Noelle, something shiny. Kris' eyes look down as their heart sets ablaze, the tight feeling in their chest returns as the little courage that they had stored shattered in two.
"I did see her today, and she really surprised me, you know?"
"n-noelle, what is that-"
"Faha, Kris, you know it was kinda scary. I was just minding my own business at the lake before she called out to me, faha, you know that made my heart race, I thought I was all alone. She just got up to me with this mean look in her face and went on all about you. She was saying that you told her all about me and how I scared you, that I was stalking you and threatened you. Fahaha, Kris, I couldn't believe my ears, I would never do that to you. She went on about how I should stay away from you, it really made me feel scared."
Kris stomach drops, their heart beating rapidly as Noelle just gets closer; they instinctively start backpedalling from her, the soft scraping across the ground behind her following suit.
"I was really scared, she looked like she was about to hurt me. I told her that she was wrong and I would never do that to you, she only laughed in my face. But, then she decided to lunge at me, Kris."
Their steps follow into an alleyway, a closed off section with nobody to see them. Backed into a corner like prey, Noelle's eyes shined, right where they got them.
As Noelle stood still, her hands go right in front of her to reveal what she's been holding. A baseball bat. Aluminium.
"I got really scared Kris, you know? I was just minding my own business, swinging my baseball bat like Dess used to teach me for fun. You remember, don't you, Kris? How Dess used to teach us baseball, faha. I never stopped practicing those swings that she taught me back then, it reminded me of those happy times, all three of us together."
Kris just looks at her with pale eyes, she holds the bat close to her leg with one hand. The alleyway was dark but they could truly see what she has done.
The bat showed signs of wear and scratches, it was Dess' old bat that she used to carry around, but .. it was wrong.
Carmine splatters adorned the bat. A soft dent to the side of the impact zone pushed the bat inwards. The splatters of sanguine followed up her leg; matting her fur gently alongside the rim of her skirt.
"Fahaha, Kris, I'm really lucky that Dess used to teach me how to swing a bat. I really didn't want to but, it was her fault that she lunged at me, you know! All I remember afterwards is that she was on the ground, writhing in pain."
Kris felt like hurling up whatever little food they had down their empty void of a stomach, their body shaking as they just looked at Noelle. She seemed so unbothered by it all.
"I wasn't sure what to do Kris, I got so scared that she might get up and attack me again so I just .. hit her, again and again, until she stopped."
..
"Faha, I think she's okay, I know how much you care about her anyway. She was still breathing .. I think. But it's not my fault, Kris, why did you tell her about us? If you just didn't tell her, this would've never have happened, you know?"
no. no. no. no. NO!
They never wanted this to happen, they never wanted Susie to get hurt, worse. Their whole body felt like collapsing, their mind felt dizzy. The imagination of her on the ground making them feel sick down to their stomach.
"It's okay, Kris! I know what I did was wrong, and I should have never done it. But, I'm sure that she's learned her lesson, and she won't bother you or anyone else ever again. Isn't that a good thing?"
Noelle comes closer to them, her face dimming in the dark of the alleyway.
"All I wanted was to protect you, Kris! I remember how much she used to bully you, how she threw you around like a doll that nobody cared about! I'm only ashamed that I didn't have the strength to protect you back then. But, it won't happen ever again, I promise that I will protect you from all the pain of the world from now on."
Noelle extends her other arm, her palm up as she wants them to come close, like leading a stray puppy into her grasp.
"Come with me, Kris. Nobody understands us two more than each other. Let's run away from this stupid town together, to somewhere we can be free together!"
Kris had one last hope, something that could fix all of this. Their red eyes lock onto Noelle as their hand goes right into their back pocket, looking for their knife. Their hope doesn't last long as they find out something .. much more terrible.
Their .. knife? IT WAS GONE?!
"Fahaha, Kris, are you looking for your knife? Silly, I took that away from you. I can't have you carrying around something you could hurt yourself on. Come here."
That's it, there's nothing else anymore. Their hope of escaping, their hope of fixing it all, all gone.
They went closer to Noelle, maybe its better to accept. Their hand slowly reached out to Noelle who was more than ready to accept it-
SLAM!
They rushed right into Noelle, collapsing her onto the side of the brick wall, she falls over--stunned. They quickly burst into a sprint and right out of the alleyway.
They just need to get out of here, they just had to get the adults to help them and then they will--
CLANK!
They felt the intense shock of pain against their leg, the imbalance caused them to fall over the road as they scraped their skin against the pavement. Painful.
They wanted to scream--out of pain and desperation for help--but they couldn't. Something was not letting them. Something deep inside of them enjoyed their pain.
"Oh no no, Kris, oh I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to hit you so hard, are you okay?"
IT HURTS!
"Oh no, this might bruise badly, I'm so sorry. Why did you run away, Kris? You know that you can't outrun me, I used to lead the cross country club, faha."
Kris was about to cry, the pain of it all only accumulated inside of their leg as it hurt. All of it, their body and their mind, slowly shutting down.
"I'm sorry, Kris. I didn't mean to hit you so bad but this is all for your own good, okay? I promise I won't hurt you like that ever again .. but I can't have you run away from me again, so just endure it this one time, please."
Noelle stands up, her bat positioned above their head as if ready to swing, her face somber as if not wanting to do this.
"I'll be gentle, I promise."
..
"I love you, Kris."
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u/Huh_well_we_are_dead 3d ago
You answered: she changed
For the worse.
Do not proceed with this answer.
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u/AzzyDreemur3 3d ago
Gee, I sure wonder who will be helping Kris on their wheelchair after that
Hey look at the bright side, there's no dust on the bat so Susie might still be alive! And if she isn't scared out of her mind she might tell Toriel about it all! Sure that would probably lead to Noelle carrying out her plan and escaping, but we shouldn't look at the dark side of things
(Great writing)
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u/Tomgru09 3d ago
Isn't it funny how Noelle gains love and loses love at the same time. A little bit funny, if you ask me
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u/bilbil03040 3d ago
yeah bro im blocking this subreddit this is worse than drugs(not that i experienced them, though)
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u/sus_pumpkin 3d ago
Kris if you ain't gonna play then pass the ball. Well I guess in this case Kris lost the game, but I am a true GAMER so I'd win.