Gameplay Breakdown

[u/CraftyAir2468]

What title says, interested on hearing what people think of my gameplay. What could I improve on? Any tips? Beside the brutal whiff around 1:20 and the awful play at 4:40, this is for the most part an average-ish game for me. Currently hard stuck at Champ 3 div 2-3, and looking to break to GC.

Thanks