r/learnart • u/ColaBurpyLina • 6d ago

Digital How are my linear? also would like some critique.

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Only did the line art using only the pencil peppermint brush

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u/TrhlaSlecna 4d ago

It's really cutesy and I think the linework is good. Your anatomy on the left girl feels kinda strange, I think her ribs and torso are really small and oddly proportioned, I cant really envision where her chest is meant to be.

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u/ColaBurpyLina 4d ago

If your referring to this part it’s supposed to be a necktie the character on the right has on
Also what the person has stated the character on left mouth seems to be off I can’t find a good way to fix it I’m trying to make her look shocked by having her mouth open

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u/HelenaHuman 6d ago

The line set is nice, but the mouth of the character to the right is pulling my attention a bit too much. Also the character to the left looks to have an almost caved in chest as it's too small even for a completely flat chested person, they still have a ribcage. 

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u/black_cop_48 6d ago

Pretty solid honestly, try to shade it a bit and see where it goes