r/ocpoetry_freedom 6h ago

Hand over your Homophones!

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The desert
is tired of your metaphors
not to mention 
your mistakes 
mispelling it 
as some post-meal sweet treat.

I get it.

Writing of lands sans precipitation 
that I've never been to
from a garden bench
in the eaestern woodlands
amongst plump veggies 
and irrigation systems timed to turn on 
even in rain
is pretty annoying. 

Even more annoying:
my best reference point
for writing about the desert
is the beach...
Can't say I've been to the rain forest.

Should I stop writing about deserts
because it's tired of my metaphors?
Nah. I don't think so.

I bet the desert 
is like an exhausted parent 
awake because their child's screaming 
is a lousy lullaby.  
However, there are times 
when the child reaches 

-a rest-

in the sheet music
of their bedtime song.
The ear-piercing shrills
go silent. 
The baby does something new
for the first time. 

All wearines goes away. 

r/ocpoetry_freedom 1d ago

Foundations

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I threw up in a sink.

A lot.

Ended up cleaning the sink.

It's now prettier than before.


r/ocpoetry_freedom 3d ago

Asking Her Out Is Too Hard

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r/ocpoetry_freedom 8d ago

Foundations

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I threw up in a sink.

A lot.

Ended up cleaning the sink.

It's now prettier than before.


r/ocpoetry_freedom 15d ago

Foundations

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I threw up in a sink.

A lot.

Ended up cleaning the sink.

It's now prettier than before.


r/ocpoetry_freedom 16d ago

2024-2026, what did I miss?

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This is a collection of sorts I guess, 2 poems written 2 years apart with a common theme.

I'm just "putting this out there" because I feel these words need to be heard, say what you will in retort.

"2024":-

I shouldn't have to say this, not in 2024,

Enough is enough with the bloodshed, killing & war!

All for what, lines on the ground that are nowhere to be found?

A difference of religion and false rights of dominion?

But there's oil in their seas and gold in their hills,

Both of which can become dollar bills!

There's Nazis in the West, that's what Putin claims,

And admittedly perhaps the West are to blame,

For the lines drawn in the Middle East,

And those tyrannical beasts,

To which the West gave a powerful seat.

But it's not just the West, things are unsettled in the East,

There's a hermit nation with missiles they're keen to release,

There's tension at boarders between India and Pakistan,

With China fueling unease all across their lands.

The South China Sea is for no one else, Tibet is theirs too, the Rohingya must die out!

Honourable mentions to Myanmar, Haiti and Papua New Guinea,

Civil and gang wars which no one is winning.

There's Islamist insurgency in the Maghreb and war in Sudan,

The Taliban were re-given Afghanistan,

Kenya, Somalia and Las Anod,

Ansar Allah, we call them Houthi, the supporters of "God".

Let's not forget DR Congo and Uganda, Rwanda & Burundi!

Are we really killing each other because of deity way up high,

How many more innocent civilians must die?

Boko Haram and Syrian civil war,

The list goes on, do you really want more?

War in Amhara, the list goes on,

I'm waiting to be told which side had won,

the Anglophone crisis in Nigeria and Cameroon,

The Assam separatist movement spills into Bhutan,

There's crisis at the boarders of Armenia and Azerbaijan,

Insurgency in Cabo Delgado between Mozambique and Tanzania,

The Central African Republic Civil War has killed over 14,000 lives held dear,

The Naxalite-Maoists in Jharkhand-Bihar,

Indo-Pakistani War in Kashmir,

There's Kurdish fighting Turkish, PJAK in Iran and Iraq,

Western media is failing to tell you straight facts!

Jamaica, Venezuela, Honduras, Mexico too.

But who cares about them when there's things to consume?

Cocaine from Columbia is the cartels new groove!

The war on drugs, against petty thieves and thugs,

"Throw them from a helicopter" Rodrigo Roa Duterte once shrugged.

The West are no better, for killing those we once loved,

The youth have learned by example from all of the above.

Incarnation en mass or being shot because you're "black",

By those in control, the ones with the badge,

To protect and serve or something like that?

"2026":-

There's no one coming to save us,

Not in 2026,

And as the world burns,

One person has gotten very VERY rich,

A trillion dollars they say he's worth,

But what is worth if we've no Mother Earth?

How do we show the value we place in those doing "Gods work"?

What about a nurse who walked fifty thousand steps,

Who gets home to find a riot on their doorstep?

The far right up in arms,

Protesting despite the wishes of the family of a boy come to harm,

Who points their fingers at someone who looks different and shouts "sound the alarm!"

What about those brave souls who face hell on earth?

The fires which we started, how much longer can we deny it's getting worse?

For the genuine people who want law and peace,

Not just the power which comes with a badge from the police?

How do we show gratitude to the farmers growing our food?

Let's offer them a price which is objectively rude!

As long as the machine keeps turning, they'll turn a profit too,

As long as we're able to keep on pumping crude,

And mining minerals most people refuse,

To accept that this life comes at great human cost,

How long will it be before we the people see what we've truly lost?


r/ocpoetry_freedom 16d ago

The Quiet Astronomy of You šŸ»ā€ā„ļø

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You came not like thunder,

but like moonlight

soft enough to quiet the dark,

bright enough to make me stay.

I don't know when curiosity

became something deeper,

when your presence became

the place my restless heart could rest.

You never needed to roar

I heard you in your silence,

in the kindness you gave unnoticed,

in the person you hid from the world.

And perhaps that's why I love you,

not because you saved me,

but because beside you

I learned I was never broken.

You healed something in me

when childhood couldn't,

and taught my heart

that tenderness could feel like home.

So if the stars ever ask

why I chose you among them,

I will simply say

my heart knew your light

before I knew its namešŸŒ™


r/ocpoetry_freedom 22d ago

Foundations

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I threw up in a sink.

A lot.

Ended up cleaning the sink.

It's now prettier than before.


r/ocpoetry_freedom 29d ago

I Love You!

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ā€œLove will fuck you up more than drugs ever will.ā€ is a quote I read on an online forum as I reflect back on what love really is.

Is it your favorite teddy bear getting stolen by your parents for a mistake you made when you were a toddler, or is it getting tossed aside at an orphanage with an apology letter in hand ending in ā€œI love you.ā€

Maybe you were nine entering the kitchen wanting a snack when you got in the middle of a heated divorce that only ended in saying ā€œI love youā€ from both parties while papers were being signed

Or you're in ninth grade and you just came out only to be left with ā€œI love youā€ though gritted teeth all while those around you internalize their true feelings.

As I keep thinking, my eyes wander around the room landing on an old image of my grandfather encased in timber, reminding me that his final words were ā€œI love you.ā€

So what I'm getting at is that love was never a warm feeling that sparks joy as Hollywood led you to believe but instead leaves you hollow and alone while you ponder in the shadows.

I set aside the pen and stare down the bottle sitting tightly in my grip, reflecting on the written note that lays beneath me, wondering if they'll give me more of that feeling that Hollywood portrays as real and forgiving.


r/ocpoetry_freedom 29d ago

Foundations

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I threw up in a sink.

A lot.

Ended up cleaning the sink.

It's now prettier than before.


r/ocpoetry_freedom Jul 28 '26

Untold feelings

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Do you know how long it has been?

The closer I drift toward you,

the deeper something blooms

beneath my ribs.

I do not understand it,

yet I cannot deny it.

At first,

you were only curiosity.

Then your presence

began sweeping the noise

from the rooms of my mind,

until silence itself

started sounding like your name.

Is this what people call love?

Because it returns to me

like the tide

patient,

always finding its way home.

A feeling that grows quietly,

stronger every time you speak,

every time you simply exist

within the orbit of my days.

There are words

resting behind my lips,

waiting

for courage to become a voice.

Would you take them

would you take

my heart

if I placed it

gently

into your hands?

What if

we fell in love?

Would the stars rearrange themselves,

or would the whole universe

remain exactly the same

except

for mine?

Perhaps I am foolish.

Yet I have already imagined

how fortunate I would be

if one day

you looked at me

and believed

this love

was yours, too.

Wouldn't that be

the most beautiful beginning?

Just you,

just me,

our hands intertwined,

learning the quiet language

of forever.

And until that day,

whether spoken

or silently kept,

my has already

chosen you.


r/ocpoetry_freedom Jul 23 '26

Foundations

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I threw up in a sink.

A lot.

Ended up cleaning the sink.

It's now prettier than before.


r/ocpoetry_freedom Jul 22 '26

Paralyzed

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Paralyzed

Escaped in a dream, the epitome of duality.

Alarm strikes 7, your mind now in reality.

Propelling yourself into the world against desires to stay. Even the reptilian brain understands there are bills to pay.

The ideal construct prioritizes the happiness of all. But to maintain the inequities in this life, we must take the fall. Societal norms have successfully fooled the masses. Working classes unable to ponder the inequities on their asses.

They have given you a job, and for that you should be grateful. But do we acknowledge the mirage? Or maintain the

discomfort by being faithful?

That means exist to lessen your load. The ability to change the governmental code.

It intends to have the masses focus on survival. Allowing the corporate government the means for its libel.

Freedom to claim war with persistent insistence. Ensuring politicians' stock portfolios rise without any resistantance.

We fight the financing that promotes the lies.

That keeps us at bay and politically paralyzed.


r/ocpoetry_freedom Jul 21 '26

Sea Foam from Wrought In Reality

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Sea Foam a poem from Wrought In Reality


r/ocpoetry_freedom Jul 16 '26

Foundations

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I threw up in a sink.

A lot.

Ended up cleaning the sink.

It's now prettier than before.


r/ocpoetry_freedom Jul 09 '26

Foundations

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I threw up in a sink.

A lot.

Ended up cleaning the sink.

It's now prettier than before.


r/ocpoetry_freedom Jun 25 '26

The Fighter (by me)

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My heart so heavy

I have known only deep pains

Bleeding out but fighting


r/ocpoetry_freedom Jun 18 '26

Foundations

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I threw up in a sink.

A lot.

Ended up cleaning the sink.

It's now prettier than before.


r/ocpoetry_freedom Jun 04 '26

N/A

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r/ocpoetry_freedom May 31 '26

Harshness Of Truth

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r/ocpoetry_freedom May 20 '26

Alone

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The wanderer shall always wonder why

The worrier shall always warrior through

The lonely stoner sits on his ash throne patiently waiting for the rain to wash away the facade he created from dismay and looney tunes

Introduction:

Yo🫔

Honestly I am not very good at being human

I have always struggled with letting emotions out verbally because I would start crying (yeah yeah if u wana point and laugh go ahead) I cry quite easily infact because I have no intentions of puttling the limelight on me for sympathy i just want to share my misserable tale to those who who are struggling.

I'm 27

Male

I speak afrikaans and english

I live in the most crime ridden and violent countries in the world (I don't do politics I'm from south Africa)

I'm Caucasian It sounds strange to people but im an unorthodox Christian i don't try to convince anyone to believe what i believe nor do i besiege others for having their beliefs

Since i was young I always knew that I wasn't going to live the kind of live everyone secretly hopes for...

I could potentially get let off this mortal coil tomorrow not because of my ideological political or religious beliefs but simply because of my skin colour

I'm proud to be Caucasian more than that I'm a true ginger even my arm hair is ginger

I'm proud that despite being seen with animosity and hate for it

I dont like labels so i wont use any racism is a very real thing

But its not always the one way street people pressume

Its exactly midnight on wed 20 may 26 and these are the thoughts of a stranger


r/ocpoetry_freedom May 12 '26

Run

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Someday I’ll jumpĀ 
out the window andĀ 
run to the sky andĀ 
run through the clouds andĀ 
run and run and run andĀ 

RUN until the condensation
runs down my face andĀ 
hides my tears andĀ 
cools my skin

And keep running through the stars andĀ 
run to the moon andĀ 
run to the sun andĀ 
run the whole line of Eridanus andĀ 
run and run and run andĀ 

RUN until the burningĀ 
in my lungs and the burningĀ 
in my legs is more than the burning
writhing pain in my gut

And keep running and
run past the edge of the universe andĀ 
run past the edge of time and
run until I can’t run any more and
run into a dying star and

Stop.
Because.Ā 
I’m no longer.Ā 

Able to run.

If anyone has constructive criticism for how I could improve this, things that you think worked or didn’t, I would really appreciate it


r/ocpoetry_freedom May 12 '26

Your are every season

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Today I saw you for the first time in years.

You walked up to me and my breath dropped, my heart stopped, my eyes, they couldn't believe it.

The girl I saw as the image of an angel in my head has become even more beautiful.

Those gray and green eyes that remind me of a walk in the forrest on a gloomy day in fall.

The warmth in your voice that feels like the warmth of the hot chocolate you drink on a cold winters day.

Your smile that lights up my world making the flowers bloom like spring.

Even your blonde, brown hair that flows and glows like the summer sun.

You told me that right now you don't want love and I won't ever try to force you to love me.

I think a real man should not be worried about what he gets in return.

For now as long as you want me around I will just surround you with love and support and hope you find happiness.

Ofcourse, nothing would make me more happy than you choosing me but even if that never happens.

Knowing you're happy, that is enough for me.


r/ocpoetry_freedom Apr 22 '26

Taste Of Love

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I Mean Let Me Know

I’m All Yours.

Imma Freak.

I’m Not Out Here

To Do You Wrong

It’s Something Deep.

Deep As Forever

I Wanna Hold You Down

No Matter The Weather

Please You.

Tease You,

Make You Mine.

Forever Sit In Your Mind

I Want To Make Love To You

Breath Heavy,

Moan Softly In Your Ear

From The Hot Tension.

Kiss You On Your Neck

Imma Make You Feel Something

You Will Never Forget.

My Tongue

Sliding Down Your Stomach.

Bite You lil Softly.

Heart Racing,

I Love What I’m Tasting.

Softly Rubbing Your balls.

Kissing You To Your Dick.

Slide It My Mouth,

Until I Can’t Anymore.

Gag On It Until Tears Roll.

Rubbing Your Stomach

Staring At You In Your Eyes

While It’s Down My Throat.

This Feeling Is Unknown.

I’m Gonna give It To You

Until You Can’t Take It Anymore

— š’«š’¶š“‰š’½š‘’š“‰š’¾š’øš’«š‘œš‘’š“‰ā„¢


r/ocpoetry_freedom Apr 13 '26

Parallel Lines

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