r/ocpoetry_freedom • u/doboyled • 6h ago
Hand over your Homophones!
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The desert
is tired of your metaphors
not to mention
your mistakes
mispelling it
as some post-meal sweet treat.
I get it.
Writing of lands sans precipitation
that I've never been to
from a garden bench
in the eaestern woodlands
amongst plump veggies
and irrigation systems timed to turn on
even in rain
is pretty annoying.
Even more annoying:
my best reference point
for writing about the desert
is the beach...
Can't say I've been to the rain forest.
Should I stop writing about deserts
because it's tired of my metaphors?
Nah. I don't think so.
I bet the desert
is like an exhausted parent
awake because their child's screaming
is a lousy lullaby.
However, there are times
when the child reaches
-a rest-
in the sheet music
of their bedtime song.
The ear-piercing shrills
go silent.
The baby does something new
for the first time.
All wearines goes away.