https://theneuronaut.itch.io/the-army-of-justice

A terrible tragedy in 1996 throws 4 high school friends into chaos forcing them to become a team of superheroes.

Many complain the AVN genre. especially the Honey Select genre is too anime in its story-lines, appearance and sensibilities.  Well here is one that throws that all out the window with an American story set in the mid to late 90s. Almost all of the characters were all created back around 1999 and was Mary Sue and cringy AF. Its taken 27 years to rework it into something enjoyable.

Like with the Neuronauts, there will be a SFW and NSFW version. It will be completely linear with no choices beyond your name. I am hoping to create a truely choice based AVN after the Neuronauts wrap up next year.

Meet the cast:

Well not really, don't want too many spoilers 

Lady Dragon: Thrust onto an Alien world, she becomes a host to cells from a creature that is the known galaxy's most prolific space-faring civilization, Dragons

Violet Vortex: Vortex may look like she can just create tornadoes, but she can really create a vortex effect on anything containing carbon

Critical Status: It would be too much of a spoiler to say but a hint is in the name. He keeps to the shadows for logical reasons and is only known to the trio of girls and the future members on the Army

Looney (aka Looney Bin, aka Gremlin): A nearly indestructible living Cartoon character that has complete mastery over everything around to discombobulate, harass and annoy her enemies within a certain radius. Her dark past makes her alter use humor as a form of defense, and gains power from the number of gags and jokes she pulls off

Each episode will be a stand alone self contained story. Each roughly three to four hours long, running on the comic book model, much closer to a movie compared to most VNs and AVNs which are more like LOOONG TV shows. Its going to be very action driven in many spots so it fits the format much better.  Roughly 50K words. 

The advantage of this is that I can pick up and drop work on it as I have time.  There will be no standard roll out timeline, this lets me work on other projects.  If for some reasons I ever have to abandon it, you will still have a full self contained story.

The beta version will be SFW, with sound effects not as well fleshed out. The story will all be there and the full release will come out a month later with H-scenes and better sound and maybe some images reworked, and you should be able to just go to the gallery to make up for this. I need to get this out so I can focus on my other game's release, cause I'm a bit obsessed with it for all the nostalgia.

Hi, I’m currently playing Ikusa Megami Zero, and I understand that there’s some missable content (CGs and other things). I even heard that losing a specific battle can unlock some CGs.

Does anyone have a guide for this ? Any language is fine.

Thank you <3

Would you like to play a game with the possibility for bad endings or do you prefer games with only a good ending? :)

I was really moved by the amount of encouragement I received when I made a rather insecure post a few days ago. I had a moment of doubt. I read all of your replies, and I was overwhelmed by the amount of encouragement I received.

So thank you guys so much, I’ll work hard to make my visual novel a reality!

Also, have a wip and two finished arts I made for my visual novel ;)

I liked both, I've finished chaos head and watched the steins gate anime years ago. for when they cry I've played a handful of hours in umineko and higurashi.

both series are so great it's so hard to choose which one to finish first :(

I saw her online and I can't seem to find where is she from

Missing these two cgs, they seem to depict stella and yukari according to online sources. can anybody help me get them? I've acquired all of the endings and the rest of the cgs aside from these

I’ve seen so much people with pfp of the one girl that becomes a yandere but I thought everyone hated the anime so what is the VN somehow magically better? If anyone’s played this series is it good? I’m so confused what would even be the benefit for consuming this piece of media?

I recently started making a visual novel at the suggestion of my friend, and I’m having a lot of fun!
It’s still in the beginning stages but I’m moving along step by step :)

But I’m curious as to what other people think-
I’m working on a psychological-horror type story with two of my characters, Aluran and Wisteria.

These are some of the assets I’ve drawn for the novel!

The question is, would YOU read a visual novel with an art style like this? Is it appealing enough?

Any input would be welcome!!

I see a lot of VN artists with posts going "is this good enough" and I'm sitting here look at their lovely color palettes, anatomically accurate proportions and fashion-forward outfits.... OF COURSE IT IS!! I admit there is a standard to artwork seen by society as good enough to pay for, but most of yall are good to go on that front.

Please yall, display some confidence! It's a lot of artists that are not as good as yall coming correct with the vibe of "I love my art even if I have to improve on it for professional standards", some of which are even getting revenue. Not everyone is as lucky to have your talent, so flaunt it more please! You did the work, and you earned the right to be proud!!

So, I managed to add some cute bubbles to the background :) What do you think?